Interview with Guy Gavriel Kay by Raymond H. Thompson
Mythcon: Vancouver, B.C. 30th July 1989
Interview reproduced by kind permission of Raymond H. Thompson. Mr. Thompson conducted a series of interviews with authors of modern Arthurian Literature. To read the rest of his inteviews, click to The Camelot Project of Rochester University.
Like Katz, Guy Gavriel Kay agreed to give me this
interview at the Mythopoeic Conference in Vancouver where he was the Guest of
Honor. He gave an enthralling after-dinner speech in which he recalled his year
helping Christopher Tolkien to edit The Silmarillion. Thus when the
organizers of the annual science fiction convention in Wolfville, Nova Scotia,
where I teach, sought my advice for a Guest of Honor, I was able to recommend
him warmly. I welcomed the opportunity, moreover, to meet again someone with
whom I had shared the experience of judging a costume contest at a fantasy
convention. The bond this establishes runs deep. Arthurian
figures comprise but a handful among the many champions and supernatural powers
woven into Kay's Fionavar Tapestry: The Summer Tree (New York: Arbor
House, 1984), The Wandering Fire (New York: Arbor House, 1986), and
The Darkest Road (New York: Arbor House, 1986). They play an important
role, however, for the pattern of expiation for past sins is as crucial to
Arthurian legend as it is to the Fionavar Tapestry itself. At the end, Arthur
and his companions win release from their continuous struggle, but they must pay
a high price, a sobering reminder for those who imagine that fantasy is mere
escapism.
RT: What attracted you to the Arthurian legend as a thread
in the Fionavar Tapestry?
GGK: The Arthurian materials constituted part
of a wider interest in myth and legend as a whole, which in turn was the
starting point for an interest in working with fantasy. This was a childhood
passion that grew into an adolescent one, then expanded into an adult one. It
started at the storytelling level, then ultimately spread into the
quasi-academic level. Among the materials of legend a great many worked their
way into Fionavar. The Arthurian matter assumed a primacy partly because of the
nature of the story. I was working with Celtic myth and tradition fairly
extensively, and within that tradition Arthuriana is quite likely to rise
towards preeminence.
In addition, an important part of my
very early attraction to myth and legend was a specific attraction to Arthurian
tradition, although I can't date my first exposure to it. I read various
retellings for younger readers, and T. H. White was an early source that I read
with great admiration. He took me straight to Malory as a teenager. Malory was a
revelation. I can still virtually quote the speech over the dead body of
Lancelot, and will, unhesitatingly, push that as one of the most moving passages
in our literary tradition. Even today I sometimes read that passage again; I can
give myself shivers with the beauty of the writing and with the depth that
underlies the sentiment.
RT: When you came to write the Fionavar
Tapestry, then, did the Arthurian material take its place as just one more of
the mythological elements you made use of?
GGK: Yes, although it may have
been more than that. In the days before the book took shape, I kept a series of
notebooks in which I would jot down ideas for possible projects: poetry, essays,
novels. Whenever I had a notion or a concept which seemed to belong in what
became Fionavar, my note to myself would read: idea for "Arthur." The book was
never going to be called "Arthur," which I knew would be a silly title for what
it ended up being. From the very beginning, however, I assumed as a given that
the Arthurian myth would ultimately play a central
role.
Some people reading the trilogy were surprised by the
emergence of the Arthurian figures in the second volume, despite what I thought
were fairly extensive foreshadowings in the first. I have encountered responses
like, why does Arthur suddenly come in? or did you suddenly decide partway
through to bring the Arthurian material in? The Arthurian material was, in fact,
integral to the first conception of the trilogy. I wanted to find my own avenue
into working with the Arthurian material, to see if I could find a way to create
a scaffolding or a canvas for a book which would be large enough for that
material to be a central part, but not the whole
story.
Fairly early on, I recognized the power of the
story: the love triangle, Arthur's slaying of the children, the concept of the
Once and Future King, Avalon and the return in time of need. The astonishing
power of the Arthurian story required that I extend the ambit of the rest of my
story as widely as possible, or run the risk of the Arthurian element dwarfing
it. So the task I set myself was to fit the Arthurian story in, like a gemstone
in a setting; but it is so bright and so large and so resonant for readers that
it forced me--I think in a healthy, useful way--to stretch my scope in the other
parts so that it wouldn't be entirely out of proportion to the rest of the
story.
RT: How did you go about striking the right balance between the
Arthurian element and the other elements within the story?
GGK: That's a
difficult question to answer because it goes to the heart of the creative
process--how one goes about writing a novel, as it were. I think there were two
or three different factors at work. One was that, whenever I was writing
sections of the book that incorporated Arthurian figures, I was immensely
conscious of the fact. These sections were almost invariably among the most
difficult of the book, the most carefully thought out prior to writing, and the
most carefully reworked afterwards. I was continuously aware, while I was
working with the Arthurian material, that I was laying hands on a received body
of literature of immense power. I was concerned about appearing presumptuous.
Some authors may say, well, since everyone's had a shot at it, why shouldn't I?
That wasn't my attitude. I was immensely aware that this is a body of material
of great power for a great many people, and that I was changing it. I was quite
conscious of changing it, particularly in the inversion.
To the best of my knowledge, no one else has ever inverted
180 degrees the idea of the Once and Future King, as I ultimately do with the
notion that Arthur is not resting among the blessed, our savior and champion in
time of need, because of his greatness and glory. Rather I see him as cursed to
return in our time of need at the cost of his own pain and grief. This came
about in part because of a chance, almost wry, reflection on what it must feel
like to be always on call. Dial 911 in time of need and your champion must
answer! The only time you're around is when there's a dismal, violent,
destructive, dangerous crisis! Furthermore, as part of the received material of
the legend, Arthur does not see the end of such conflicts. I found myself
thinking, that's not much of a state of grace; that is a burden and a duty and a
responsibility.
Somewhere along the line, in my early,
nebulous musings over the use of the legend, that idea fused with the often
glossed-over episode of Arthur's exposure of the children in an attempt to kill
Mordred. Merlin prophesies to him that the incestuous child of his union will
one day unravel--to use my language--and destroy the kingdom or the dream that
he is attempting to construct. The young king--I see him as an extremely young
king at that stage--undertakes a precipitous, unwise, tyrannical action. It's an
action that fits within the tradition of Biblical stories, like Pharoah in the
story of Moses ordering the male children of the Jews to be exposed, and Herod
ordering the young children slain in accounts of the birth of Christ. It's an
intriguing part of the myth, the darker layer to it, that Arthur, the
benevolent, all-wise king, should play there the role of the dangerous tyrant,
while Mordred plays the role of the hero, saved in the traditional pattern of
heroes of ambiguous birth--and an incestuous conception is as ambiguous as you
can have! These heroes were discussed by Otto Rank and Joseph Campbell: their
birth is attended upon by prophecy, and very early in life they are saved, by
miraculous or providential intercession, from death at the hands of the
tyrant.
It was while musing over the stories of the Once
and Future King and Arthur's response to Mordred's birth that I came up with the
notion of inverting the usual concept of Arthur's return into a burden and a
curse. Once I had that in place, the next step was to see the love triangle as a
manifestation of that burden and curse. The way in which Arthur was condemned
was to continually be forced to relive his betrayal at the hands of the two
people he loved.
The Fionavar Tapestry was a deliberate
attempt to work within the traditions of high fantasy, which incorporates the
idea, in Tolkien's word, of the eucatastrophe, the reverse of the catastrophe.
The resolution of the Arthurian love triangle, the unbinding of that curse,
would be central to the eucatastrophe at the end of the book.
Throughout the writing, I tried to be careful in my use of
Arthurian motifs, even peripheral ones like the Wild Hunt. That is not
exclusively Arthurian and I don't use Arthur in his capacity as leader of the
hunt. Instead I follow the Germanic tradition of Owain as leader of the Hunt,
which may be earlier. Arthur inherited the role, or it accrued to him as so many
other things did. Whenever I was dealing with the central Arthurian motifs,
however, I was deeply conscious that they were not mine. I was making use of
them.
RT: Did this restrain your freedom to use the Arthurian characters
in untraditional roles?
GGK: Restraint is one way to describe it, but
it's the same kind of restraint that a sonnet imposes upon a writer: you've got
to use fourteen lines and an iambic pentameter and a given rhyme scheme if
you're doing a proper Petrarchan sonnet. I had a sense that I could not
willy-nilly appropriate these characters. The only one I gave myself some
freedom with was Taliesin who is, in any event, remarkably chameleon-like in the
Arthurian material. I also gave myself the freedom to work with both Celtic and
later French versions of the story. We know the Arthurian tradition today from
the French by way of Malory. Research into the Celtic traditions is immensely
instructive and deeply fascinating, but in terms of the survival of the
Arthurian material in popular awareness, I don't think there's any question that
the French have won.
RT: Could you say more about the Arthurian works
that first aroused your interest in the legend? You've mentioned that T. H.
White led you back to Malory. Did you read other medieval works as
well?
GGK: Yes. I became very interested in medieval literature, though
I'm by no means a medieval scholar; I would back away in horror from such
designation. I read The Mabinogion, Tain bo Cualnge, The Song
of Roland, The Neibelungenlied, Parsival by Wolfram von
Eschenbach, Sir Gawain and the Green Knight, Pearl, and Sir
Orpheo.
RT: How about the chronicles?
GGK: In my later teens
I read Geoffrey of Monmouth, Gildas, and Giraldus Cambrensis and came back to
them again. There was a period of time when I thought I might study either
medieval or Rennaissance history, or comparative religion and anthropology-- the
ground being covered by people like Joseph Campbell. The reading helped me to
become very deeply suffused with the material of myth--and not just the
Arthurian legend.
RT: How about post-medieval works? You mentioned White;
presumably you've read Tennyson and T. S. Eliot's Waste Land?
GGK: Absolutely, and Eliot sent me back to Jessie Weston. In a very
fundamental way, James Fraser is a formative influence for me. I usually cite
Joseph Campbell as a more contemporary, accessible, lucidly expressed synthesis
of mythical materials, but no one who is interested in myth is going to be able
to address it without having read The Golden Bough. I've also read some
contemporary treatments of Arthurian legend, though many of them subsequent to
writing my own. I just finished reading Anthony Powell's The Fisher King,
which I found very interesting.
RT: When you were reading contemporary
novels, did you have a special preference for historical novels or
fantasy?
GGK: Historical novels certainly appealed to me. I think
Rosemary Sutcliff's Sword at Sunset is a superb book. I remember at the
age of eleven or twelve reading Marvin Borowsky's The Queen's Knight in
my grandmother's library.
I also read Babs Deal's novel
The Grail, which is a marriage of my interest in football and Arthur. I
found it an intriguing attempt, although I agree with your ultimate assessment,
in The Return from Avalon, that there's a level at which certain
transpositions of the story run a grave risk of trivializing it. Interesting
though I found the book, there's a responsibility on those of us working with
the material to be aware that it's a received body of wisdom. That, by the way,
is why I am less keen on Arthur Rex than you are, even though I admire
Thomas Berger and I've enjoyed a number of his other books. It may be that I run
the risk of having an overly grave approach to the Arthurian material, though I
loved the early sections of White's Once and Future King, Disney's
Sword in the Stone which is anything but serious in its treatment, and
the film Camelot. It dawdles along, but Vanessa Redgrave is a very vivid
image for me as Guinevere.
I wanted to create a better
Guinevere than I had tended to find elsewhere, even in White. I think she's the
great bane in a book that I deeply admire. White for me is the author I list
with Tolkien as the finest fantasist of this century. The Once and Future
King is a book that I'm passionately fond of. At the same time, perhaps
intriguingly, I think White shares with Tolkien a problem in dealing with female
characters: a shared limitation arising from quite different sources. Just about
the peak of White's ability to empathize with Guinevere is contained in the
sentence when Lancelot suddenly has a revelation that Guinevere wasn't merely
Arthur's queen; she was also "pretty Jenny who could think and feel." That's a
very sad limitation, both on the author's ability to work with his characters
and on the gift to the reader of a figure from myth and legend.
RT: Have
you read Mark Twain's Connecticut Yankee?
GGK: Yes, but it hasn't
resonated for me except for one thing: I was irritated with him for making
Merlin the villain. I found that there was a smugness in his treatment of the
legend.
RT: You're delineating, in a sense, your reaction to the
Arthurian legend, in that you respond less enthusiastically to ironic treatments
than you do to those that show greater respect. This, of course, comes through
in the treatment of the legend in your own trilogy. Had you read any books about
the history and archaeology of the Arthurian period, or were you only interested
in works of fiction?
GGK: I did read Leslie Alcock and Geoffrey Ashe's
account of the excavations at Cadbury. I even tramped through Cadbury as part of
the background to doing The Summer Tree, but it didn't have much impact
on me, unlike Stonehenge. That had an enormous impact. I discovered, and it was
a late discovery for me, the version of the story in which Uther Pendragon is
buried at Stonehenge. That was, as it were, a luminous piece of
material.
RT: Did you do all your research before you started the
trilogy, or did you come back to it once you had started?
GGK: Mostly
before. I had a lifetime interest in the Arthurian material, but I reread it
during the year or two when I was starting to block out the trilogy. I actually
wrote The Wandering Fire, which is where the Arthurian figures are
introduced rather than hinted at in foreshadowings, in New Zealand, a long way
from any of my reference materials. So in fact I wasn't reading as I wrote; I
was writing from a fairly deep immersion in the materials.
Another thing that I wanted to do with the story of Arthur
was to fit it into my own idea of Fionavar as the prime world that others mirror
and reflect imperfectly. That's what gave me a few of the throw-away notions,
for example, the idea of the king's spear in the mountain instead of the sword
in the stone. The notion I was working with was that one of the most effective
ways to convey this idea of a prime world that ours isn't quite getting right
was to slightly skew the myths, to take them and make slight changes: the sword
becomes a spear, the sword in the stone becomes a spear in the mountain. My
notion is that in the process of transmission across worlds things grow slightly
wrong. As for the spear, there's a throw-away reference early
in The Summer Tree when Sharra, the daughter of the Lord of Cathal,
speaks of her older brother who died in an accident. She mentions playing games
with him, and recalls the game of the warrior pulling the king's spear from the
mountain. That is one of a number of hints in the first novel that are meant to
prepare the reader at a latent level so that when Arthur does appear it's not
totally unexpected. What I like to do with readers is to try to create a
situation--it's such a wonderful effect as a reader when an author does it to
you--in which you read a twist in the plot and you say, what the hell? Then ten
seconds later you say, of course! I love that double effect when you catch the
reader completely for a moment, and then the reader says, I shouldn't have been
surprised, but I was. To a degree any novel is an unfolding of a mystery,
because the reader doesn't know what's going to happen and the author does, or
is discovering it just ahead of the reader.
RT: Did your reluctance to
make changes in the traditional figures from Arthurian legend cause occasional
problems when you were integrating them into the fabric of the trilogy?
GGK: Not too often. Ironically, almost the opposite thing happened to me
in the early going. I simply assumed that educated people today--and one always
likes to hope one's readers are educated--would know the broad outlines of the
Arthurian story. I didn't expect they would remember Arthur's role as child
slayer, and so I gave a fairly clear description of what happened at that point
in the myth. I did, however, assume that the broadest outlines of the love
triangle and its resolution were part of the common repository of cultural
knowledge for most people. I found out that I was wrong. The earliest drafts of
the trilogy were read by some of my acquaintances: educated professional men and
women. Two or three of these people came back to me after reading The
Wandering Fire, where the Arthurian elements of the story begin to take
shape, and said, somewhat shamefacedly something on the order of, well I know
all this story of Arthur, Lancelot, and Guinevere, of course, but it's been a
long time, and--what exactly happened again? I found myself having to give a
potted history of the relationship between the three of them, and how Camelot
was unravelled in the war that Arthur made upon Lancelot after Guinevere was
rescued.
This forced me, somewhat carefully because you
don't want to patronize the reader who does know, to introduce a few small
glosses to flesh out the story of the love triangle for the reader who might not
be familiar with it. Thus, rather than worrying about readers who knew so much
about the legend that it might constrain me from what I wanted to do with it, I
found myself running into readers who didn't know it. I wanted to use the
resonances of the triangle, but I found that I had to pluck a few chords of the
original resonance to jog memories in readers. I didn't expect that and I was
surprised that I had to do it.
RT: Ah, well, you obviously haven't been a
teacher!
GGK: Precisely. To return to your question, I never found the
plot taking me away from what I wanted to do with the characters. What I did
find our century superimposing on the figures of legend was character
development. In the thirteenth, fourteenth, and fifteenth centuries, the figures
were archetypal in the extreme. The notion of depth of personality and character
was alien to what these writers were working for. In the Introduction to his
Acts of King Arthur John Steinbeck talks about consciously wanting to
humanize Malory's figures, to search for and explore motivations for the
behavior of those caught up in the love triangle. I share that impulse with him,
and so do a great many of the authors working today. It's almost a given in
post- Tennyson treatments of the Arthurian legend.
My own
conception of the characters didn't cause me a problem in my plot because it was
integral to how the plot was evolving. An example is the equilateral nature of
the love triangle. It's not simply two men competing for the same woman, but two
friends linked by a bond that is deep and profound. That for me was not only a
given, but at the heart of the truly tragic nature of the love triangle. Now it
could quite rightly be pointed out that this is a modern treatment of the
personalities. For me, however, it was the essence of what I wanted to do with
the Arthurian story, the essence of why I found it so tragic.
RT: You
appear to be drawn to the darker, more tragic notes in the legend. You have
mentioned Tolkien's concept of the eucatastrophe, but I have always believed
that what Tolkien means by eucatastrophe is misleading in that it implies simply
a happy ending. That, however, can only be achieved after much
suffering!
GGK: The escape from catastrophe, that is how I conceptualize
it. It's the breath of relief, the mopping of the brow, and the glorious
sensation that comes from the meteor that almost hit or the shadow that almost
descended.
RT: In the process the note of loss can reverberate more
strongly than that of gain. This is my own response to the conclusion of
Tennyson's Idylls of the King.
GGK: I'd agree with you, and the
same is true of Malory and White. They move to darkness.
RT: Do
you?
GGK: Do I? Yes. For me, the Arthurian material at its base strikes a
note of sorrow and loss more powerfully than it strikes a note of gain and
triumph. I think I take that, as much as anything else, from Malory. I mentioned
to you at the outset that the eulogy over the body of Lancelot may be the
passage in all of Malory that reverberates for me most powerfully. My concept of
Lancelot is quite different from that of White, who had this brilliant notion of
him being so gentle because he sensed within himself so much violence, so much
capacity, in modern terminology, virtually for sadism. In his control of himself
the gentleness emerged. That's White; that's not what I was doing. I do agree
with you that the unfolding of the story is, to my mind, tragic in the largest
possible sense.
The enduring power of the Arthurian
material may derive in part from its mirroring of the human condition, which is
the aspiration towards excellence and greatness, towards the shaping of a vivid,
powerful, wonderful dream, brought down finally by mortal fallibility. It is a
tragic story of love undone by the complexities of love. I take as a given in my
treatment of it-- although I could easily see other people having differing
views-- that Guinevere loved both men. To my mind, the love triangle becomes
almost pedestrian if she doesn't. The power of the story comes from the
equilateral nature of the triangle.
RT: Despite your concern with the
love triangle, you don't explore the conflict between love and duty. This tends
to get pushed into the background. Instead, you develop the sense of
inevitability, of a pattern that has to be tragically re-enacted.
GGK:
The feudal question of Lancelot's duty to Arthur and his violation of that duty
is obviously central to what medieval writers would have been exploring, but I
found it more interesting and compelling to explore the transgression of bonding
and friendship than of feudal duty.
RT: Inherent in the Arthurian story
is the sense of the inevitability of fate. Arthur is going to be trapped into
the incestuous union that will eventually spell his own doom, and Lancelot is
going to fall in love with Guinevere. How did you feel about that?
GGK: I
always felt so awful when I read those passages. There was such a sense of grief
and frustration when Arthur is warned against the marriage by Merlin but
proceeds nonetheless. As a young man, I had the same response to the Orpheus
myth. Among the poems I wrote when I was younger, many of them during the year I
edited The Silmarillion, two that for me remain the most powerful are a
long poem about Guinevere and a long poem about Orpheus. In each there are
elements that speak to a sense of grief and frustration at exactly what you're
talking about--the notion of fate. Despite knowing it's forbidden, Orpheus still
turns to look back at his wife; Arthur knows that certain actions will engender
the destruction of his kingdom, and he proceeds nonetheless.
On an almost glib level, one might say that what I'm doing
in the Fionavar Tapestry is trying to provide a treatment that allows the
Arthurian characters to escape from that foretold fate. That is, in fact, my
eucatastrophe. It's entirely possible that this deep sense of frustration--even
of resentment--against the notion of a foretold doom, against the notion of
prophecies that are fulfilled even though people have been warned about them,
has led to my interest in free will. Free will is a fundamental theme in all of
my writing. It's deeply important to me to believe in it.
One of the ways that free will is expressed in my
treatment of the Arthurian material is to set up a situation where it appears to
be absent, then establish that it is indeed present. There is an escape from the
apparent inevitability of cycles of doom.
In The Darkest
Road, Arthur asks the name of the battlefield on which they're standing in
the Plain of Andarien, and someone replies that it's named Camlann. That was one
instance when I knew I was losing all but those readers who know the Arthurian
material well, but for those who don't it's explained to a certain degree, and
it would reverberate for those who do. When Arthur hears the name of the
battlefield he shoulders his doom, accepting that this is the end for him.
Diarmuid, however, chooses to assume the burden instead of Arthur or Lancelot,
and this was my assertion of the possibility of human free will in the person of
an anarchic spirit. Diarmuid has already been set up as an independent,
apparently irresponsible, figure. He serves to introduce the spirit of anarchy
and human independence and to shoot it into the Arthurian story, thereby
breaking the pattern and allowing the eucatastrophe.
At
the same time, of course, his death counterbalances the release of the Arthurian
figures. I hate fiction where the victory appears too easy. It's another
theme--the price of power, the price of victory. If we want something, we have
to pay for it. There is no point in setting up a cataclysmic battle of good and
evil if you allow good to triumph painlessly, for then the battle was never
cataclysmic. In the same way, if you set up these powerful figures from
Arthurian myth--Arthur, Guinevere, Lancelot, Cavall, and Taliesin--and then
change the ending of their story, then something must be done to justify that
change, to give a balancing weight to it. And that was the death of the figure
in the book whom most readers appear to find the most charismatic and
sympathetic and glamorous. My hope is that I can be allowed the release of the
Arthurian figures because I have paid a price as a writer: a character in my
book has paid a price to win that freedom.
RT: This is true, but while
another character in the book has paid the price, have Arthur and Guinevere and
Lancelot paid the price? The price that they have paid has been the re-enactment
of events that have taken place outside the frame of your novel. You could say
that Jennifer/Guinevere has paid the price, but her suffering took place before
she discovered her Guinevere identity. It's not as Guinevere that she's paid the
price.
GGK: That's a very good question. There are two considerations
here. One is that, although the price being paid by the continued re-enactment
of their grief is outside the framework of the trilogy, the nature of this
cyclical returning is spelled out quite clearly. When Arthur wakes Lancelot in
Caer Sedat, Paul tells him, you do not have to do this. Arthur simply replies,
he will be needed. He will not value himself above the overriding need. Arthur
thus voluntarily accepts that the grief will return because he chooses to wake
Lancelot.
The second consideration, aside from the notion
of ultimate expiation over cycles of years and years, is that one of the themes
of the Fionavar Tapestry is the displacement of price. The notion of a source
was a fundamental explanation of the magic that operated in the world of
Fionavar. If one person's power is made possible by someone else draining his or
her own strength, then I am prepared to allow the theme of displaced price. The
price is displaced onto Paul in The Summer Tree; Kim's exercise of the
power of the Baelrath, the "Warstone," also works in a displaced way.
RT: Although you describe the grief of all the characters over the fate
of Arthur, Guinevere, and Lancelot, they don't actually re- enact the love
triangle. Did you not worry that this omission might weaken the
story?
GGK: I tried to reveal the difficulties of the relationship when
Lancelot comes ashore, carrying the unconscious body of Arthur, and meets
Guinevere again on the strand. There is no abatement of the deep feeling that
Lancelot and Guinevere share. I see them as mirroring each other's souls,
whereas Guinevere's love for Arthur is an aspiration towards his grandeur. Their
transgression is in loving, and the intensity of that moment--this is perhaps my
own view of the traditional story--lies in her sending him away despite the
attraction that exists between them. I was dealing, not with physical adultery,
but with the emotion of love. Physical desire is less of a violation of the
bonds of marriage than deep emotional and psychological love for a third party,
and in some ways it trivializes the human failure that destroyed Camelot. When
you are unfolding events on a very large scale, which is what I'm trying to do,
there is a sense in which it diminishes the figures. I was seeing them as mythic
figures brought into a mythic landscape where I tried to integrate them with
vivid, real characters from our world.
Another concern was
not to overdo the experience of suffering. I've already been assailed by letters
from tear-stricken readers who have dealt with paroxysms of grief and pain
because their response to the trilogy has been so emotional. Had I loaded it up
even more, who knows what that would have done? It might have tipped some
balance that any novel needs.
RT: Your main characters certainly do
experience suffering. By contrast though, the suffering of your Arthurian
figures lacks immediacy. It takes place at a greater distance.
GGK: I
would maintain that Guinevere's response on the beach is not distanced; but it
is not, I'll concede, cataclysmic, on the level, say, of Kimberley's response to
what she does to the Paraiko, or what she refuses to do to the dwarves, which
are central, plot-driving threads. Part of this is a release of the love
triangle by a displacement of some of the burdens onto other figures.
I suppose it can be said that if one gives the Arthurian
love triangle a happy ending, has one not diminished it? Is its greatness not in
the tragic ending? It's possible. Since I personally believe that the greatness
of the story is a function of its tragic ending, why am I transforming that
ending? It's possible that by removing the sorrow at the heart of the story, one
in effect obviates the need for the story to go on. My answer would be that I
have changed the message of the story to one in which even the most apparently
inexorable fate, the most preordained doom, is not and need not be forever fated
and doomed. There are outlets and escapes where joy can infuse itself into
tragedy.
Although people have commented upon the dark
vision of the Fionavar Tapestry, there is in essence a happy ending to it.
There's a specifically happy ending to the Arthurian love triangle. There is a
fusing of the skylore and the earth goddess magic that takes place symbolically
in Paul and Jaelle; there is the union of Dave and Kim; and Tabor of the Dalrei
becomes an apprentice mage so that tradition is perpetuated. There is,
ultimately, and for me very importantly, the mythical happy ending, the
bountiful harvest which is a fundamental theme of myth. With the darkness
averted, never before have the crops been so good, which, of course, is what
vegetation myths are all about. When you conquer the depredations of the dark
forces, light and fertility flow freely.
RT: Of the Arthurian characters,
the one who departs significantly from tradition, which otherwise you have
honored, is Guinevere. As Jennifer, of course, she has an alter ego. Was her
abduction and rape by Maugrim an echo of the abduction of Guinevere by Meleagant
or Melwas, as he is sometimes called?
GGK: Yes, very much so. Of the five
characters we meet at the outset, Jennifer is the least fully realized in this
world, and this is very deliberate. As I was sorting out the implications of
creating an avatar of a mythic figure, who passes through an apotheosis to
become Guinevere, and who must ultimately ascend to another world, it occurred
to me that one way to make her more acceptable for the reader would be to ground
her least effectively in our world. So we don't know anything about Jennifer,
other than that her father's name is James, that she's Catholic, that she had a
relationship with Kevin Laine, and that she lives with Kim. We don't know what
she's doing as the novel opens. Kim's an intern, Kevin is articling in a law
firm, Dave's in law school, Paul is on sabbatical leave from the history
department. We don't know what Jennifer's doing, and that is very deliberate. If
I'm going to turn her into something else, it makes sense to me to make it
easier for the reader to accept that something else by making her less concrete
here.
In my earliest, nebulous playings with the story, I
toyed with the idea of representing Lancelot also by another character. There
are remnants of that in two or three false hints I give. When Arthur arrives,
Guinevere says, "There is no third. He is not here." There are suggestions that
perhaps Kevin, perhaps Diarmuid, even perhaps Aileron, might be the Lancelot
figure. I abandoned that notion fairly early, since I decided that it would be
too much for the reader to run with. There's a dilution of effect when you do
something twice, and I was hoping for a sledgehammer effect when the reader
discovers, with Kim, Arthur, and all the others, who Jennifer is.
RT: You
bring Lancelot into your trilogy by having Arthur discover him at Cader Sedat.
Was that planned from the outset, or was it a case of opportunism?
GGK:
It was planned once I realized that I shouldn't make him an alter ego figure of
another character, that he was going to have to turn up in his own incarnation.
So then I started to incorporate the notion of the cauldron of rebirth and Caer
Sidi, which I call Cader Sedat, and the idea of Caer Sidi as the spiral castle,
which is the corona borealis in the sky. This is the prison or the tomb of all
true kings that ever reigned. I don't remember where I got that, but I think it
may be in Robert Graves. The association of Caer Sidi as a prison, as a tomb,
led to my own notion of Cader Sedat as a resting place for the heroic dead of
all the worlds.
RT: Had you already planned to use Cader Sedat as the
source of the winter that was afflicting Fionavar?
GGK: Yes. Thus the
finding of Lancelot fit right in, just as Arthur's voyage to Cader Sedat recalls
the old Welsh poem, supposedly recited by Taliesin, "The Spoils of
Annwfn."
RT: Although you arouse our expectations that Arthur will play a
crucial role in that episode, he doesn't, does he?
GGK: His crucial role
is as navigator. He's the one who knows how to get there. The expectations are a
deliberate red herring. Since the reader expects Arthur to die before the
ending, and since the adventure takes place near the end of a volume, it is
possible for an author to take advantage of this situation. The reader assumes
that the mage Metran will lower his shield to kill Arthur, and that thereby
victory will be gained at the price of Arthur's life. I can only set that
assumption up powerfully if I make use of the sense of predestiny and doom
that's lying in wait for him.
RT: Were you tempted to include any other
Arthurian figures, such as Morgan le Fay, Mordred, or Gawain?
GGK: No.
I've got Merlin-type figures in my own mages and didn't need more magic users.
Indeed between Cavall, Taliesin, and the love triangle, it seemed to me that I
was already in serious danger of overbalancing my narrative with mythic,
iconographic figures. To start bringing in the Round Table in truckloads would
be--
RT: A bit overwhelming.
GGK: It's obviously possible. For
example, in The Lord of the Rings Tolkien has Aragorn walk the Paths of
the Dead, bringing them back to join the battle. It's done in other books too,
where ghosts come to fight on behalf of good. It would not have been difficult,
but on the other hand not especially original, to find some way to have the
various warriors of Camelot come tumbling out of a cliffside or something for
the last battle. And Gawain, as the sun rises, is majestic--you know, it
wouldn't have been hard. There's a mention of Gawain, in fact, on the ship, when
they refer to the trick he used to try to beat Lancelot once.
RT: Was
the Fionavar Tapestry originally planned as a trilogy, or did you intend to
write a single long book?
GGK: It was intended to be a big book and a
trilogy, both. One of the things I hate is the proliferation of big multi-volume
books in the fantasy genre. At one significant level I wrote the Fionavar
Tapestry with the metaphor in mind of throwing down a gauntlet to all of the
people who are perceived as having diminished and degraded the genre of high
fantasy in the post- Tolkien period by writing derivative, mercenary, lazy
fantasies. I saw myself to some degree as trying to say: I'm going to use as
many of the central motifs and themes of high fantasy as I can, and I shall try
to give the lie to those who have debased it, by showing that there's still a
great deal of life in the genre, that it's infinitely larger than twenty years'
of hack work. We're not capable of debasing it, ultimately.
One of the cliches of the genre has been the trilogy since
the accident of The Lord of the Rings being published that way; and it
was an accident, for it wasn't planned as a trilogy. In the light of that, I
gave some careful thought to the breaks in the books. The Tapestry was written
to be published in three volumes. The Summer Tree takes place over a span
of about ten days, after which there's a seven-month gap before The Wandering
Fire begins. This provides a natural break between the volumes. The
Wandering Fire, which ends with Lancelot's entry into the story, also ends
with a complete resolution of one major thread of the plot: the duel of the
wizards.
RT: Is this an echo of the struggle between Gandalf and Saruman
in Tolkien's Lord of the Rings?
GGK: Not deliberately, although I
suppose in terms of the larger plot you could say that there's an echo in the
structure, and that there's a defeating of the lesser villain before moving on
to deal with the larger villain. It was, however, more a working out of my
mythic vegetation thread, the Adonis story as incarnated in Kevin, and the
moving away from magic. One very good paper on the trilogy discusses the
progression away from magical power towards moral and mythic power. Loren loses
his magic, and Kim renounces hers. As the story progresses, people increasingly
lay down the implements of magical power in favor of mythic status or moral free
choice.
RT: Did your conception of the Tapestry change as the trilogy
progressed, particularly with reference to the Arthurian elements?
GGK:
Very much. One example that occurs towards the end of the trilogy did not come
to me until about two days before I wrote it. Diarmuid's death releases Arthur
and Lancelot to continue to play a role in the final battle; this allows Arthur
to save Tabor, the young boy of the Dalrei, when he is thrown free from the
mortal combat between the winged unicorn and Maugrim's dragon. I knew that he
would survive, but not how until I actually wrote the episode. I remember
smiling as I was writing, and knowing that something had worked, that I'd done
something right. Because, of course, that is the symbolic expiation of the child
slayer; he becomes the child saver at that moment. Now I don't want to make a
big deal of it. I have an aversion to authors inserting footnotes that say, note
the significance of this particular thing! I was, nonetheless, immensely happy
that the evolution of the plot allowed me to do that. I hadn't planned it and it
wasn't integral to anything.
RT: In the course of so long a work,
changes to your original plan must inevitably have taken place. Did any of these
changes cause problems of consistency in your characters?
GGK: I think
the question mark there would be Flidais, the Taliesin figure. That character
shifted and expanded on me from the original conception as the forest warden. He
didn't, in my mind, have the role of Taliesin when I introduced him in the first
book, with Dave in Pendaran Wood. At first the only connection I planned he
would have with Arthur was that he would be the one who didn't know the
summoning name, and that there would be a plot development in that regard. He
knows all the riddles in the world, save one--it's not even really a riddle,
although the old-fashioned riddles were often not really riddles. That was his
connection to my Arthurian material, originally.
Then I
began blocking out and thinking about The Wandering Fire, where the
Arthurian figures incarnate themselves and Caer Sidi comes into it. This brings
the Taliesin figure in more directly, and as I read the Taliesin material, the
character Flidais, who is in fact the son of a god in the Fionavar Tapestry,
accrued to himself a shape-shifting identity that incorporated Taliesin. That
led me to give him a role in the eucatastrophe that concludes the trilogy. It is
probably fair to say that this Taliesin role is inconsistent with his first
introduction, because I have him sailing a boat at the end, whereas he first
appears as a forest figure.
Now, I can step back and say,
well, this figure had many identities, many roles. In his Taliesin identity he
was, in fact, one of the band who went to Caer Sidi, and so this shift is not
inconsistent given his multi-faceted nature. Nonetheless, if you were to ask me
if there is a part of the trilogy where I'm conscious there is a weak spot,
where I may have reached for too much and blurred someone's identity, that would
be the figure. Flidais was not Taliesin when I first conceived him. He acquired
that role.
RT: Did you consider revising the earlier section to prepare
for this development in Flidais?
GGK: No, because when I looked at it, I
saw that I had already at least tangentially connected him to the Arthurian
figures by virtue of the summoning name. So it wasn't totally
gratuitous.
RT: Did you at any time write yourself into situations you
later regretted, such as killing off a character prematurely?
GGK: No. I
was worried about such a possibility, but I was lucky. The Summer Tree
came out before I had written The Darkest Road, though the latter was
done before The Wandering Fire had to be finally proofed. I was able to
go back into The Wandering Fire and make certain small adjustments. In
terms of the broadest structures of the story, however, I didn't get trapped in
the way that Tolkien found himself trapped by The Lord of the Rings being
in print when he wanted to do certain things in The Silmarillion with,
for example, the Galadriel figure. Her role in The Lord of the Rings grew
so much larger than his Elf Queen Galadriel in The Silmarillion papers
which preceded the novel. Then he felt the need to go back into The
Silmarillion papers and expand her stature in the First Age of Middle Earth
to account for her stature in the Third Age. Perhaps because the Fionavar
Tapestry was written over two years rather than thirty, I didn't run into
problems with any of the major threads.
RT: If you could wave a magic
wand that would rewrite the book, what would you change?
GGK: I think it
could be a somewhat destructive process to become too preoccupied with
rewriting. My own sense, however, is that I became more assured in my writing as
the trilogy progressed, so that were I to go back, I think I would pay some
attention to the first few chapters before the characters from our world cross
to Fionavar. I might polish the prose itself, perhaps adding some gloss notes on
character and toning down others. I have some sense that the book doesn't begin
as strongly as I would like it to; that there is some impediment for the reader
in the first few chapters; that the trilogy takes off when they're in Fionavar
rather than when they're in Toronto.
RT: What particular aspect of the
Arthurian legend did you feel was most important to include in the
story?
GGK: That's a difficult one. I suppose what was key for me in my
use of the material--which isn't the same as saying I think it's the most
important thing in the Arthurian legend--but what was vital for me was to use
the notion of Arthur as child slayer. That gave me access to a way of working
with the Arthurian material. That was my innovation: the notion of being
condemned to be the Once and Future King, the Warrior, by virtue of a crime in
youth. The crime was not the incest, because I'm not coming out of a religious
tradition where unknowing incest is a great crime. It's the sentient ordering of
the death of the children. That's the element of the story that gave me my curse
on Arthur; that gave me access to the return of Guinevere and Lancelot as part
of that curse; and that gave me, ultimately, the eucatastrophe when the curse is
lifted by the intercession of someone else shouldering a burden.
RT:
Thank you.
© Raymond Thompson
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